Imagine. Before our universe, before our time, living beings -- like us, perhaps. Obliterated, but for their ghosts, unable to do anything but watch. Watch our universe begin.
Wrote it starting out with a phrase I had stuck in my head...evolved with the theme "beginnings" in mind and then eventually grew into my entry for #theWrittenRevolution "One Year Later" contest.
feedback: does it seem contradictory? is it understandable? too abstract? do you suggest i add/cut some stuff?